My cat

I like animals very much. But I like cats best. Her name is Mimi. She is very lovely. She has a small black nose and a long tail. Her legs are short. When I get home, She always wags her tail and walks up to me. When she feels hungry, she meows loudly .Now she`s very fat.

I love my little cat very much.

六（1）郭佳蒙

Mr. Guo点评：简洁流畅的语言向大家描述了一只讨人喜爱的小猫。