My rabbits

I have two lovely rabbits. Each of them has got a round head,round eyes,long ears, short legs and a small tail.

One is white, and the other is brown. They like to eat vegetables, and they like to eat the food on my hands. We are good friends. I love my rabbits.

六（3）代昂

Mr. Guo点评：短短的几句描述，就把两只可爱活泼的小兔展现在我们面前。希望代昂同学能再接再励，写出更好的文章来。