Hi, I`m Mr. Chocolate. Do you like me? I usually wear a black and white dress. Look at me, am I beautiful? I`m very sweet, so many children like me. I hope we can become good frends! Oh, it`s time to go to school.I must go. Goodbye!
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Mr. Guo点评：本篇文章字数不多，但作者用其丰富的想像力和拟人的修辞手法把一块巧克力描绘的生动形象，郭老师要给小蒙同学一个Excellent!要继续努力呦！