3. 疑问性开头

在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?

4. 倒叙式开头

在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程。如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a … story.

范文:

我自己

Hi!I am a happy and quiet girl.I am from China.I am twelve years old,I am a pupil,I am in Class Three Gread Four.I many good friends.I like many pets,the peacock panda rabbit and bird,they are lovely.I am tall ,I have around face,these are big eyes small mouth small nose on my face.I have a black long hair.I like eatting apple banana eggpiant chicken and…I like music …I often saying: book is my good friend,I like it!Who am I?Yes,my name is Lv Enhui.

Do you like me?

参考翻译:

你好!我是一个快乐和安静的女孩。我来自中国。我十二岁,我是一个学生,我在三年级四班。我有很多好朋友。我喜欢很多宠物,孔雀熊猫兔子和鸟,他们是可爱的。我个子很高,我有圆圆的脸,还有大眼睛小嘴巴小鼻子。我有黑色的长头发。我喜欢食苹果香蕉e鸡肉和…我喜欢音乐…我经常说:书是我的好朋友,我喜欢它!我是谁?是的,我的名字是Lv Enhui。

你喜欢我吗?

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